The table below shows the information about the underground railway system in six cities.
The table shows the data opened (in years), the routes (in kilometers) and the annual passengers (in millions) of railway systems in different cities. It is immediately apparent that not only does railway system in London become the first railway, but has the longest route as well. Meanwhile, Tokyo has the largest number of passenger using railway system compared to other cities.
Regarding the year of railway system opened, the first railway was opened in London in 1863. This was followed by Paris, Tokyo, Washington DC, Kyoto, and Los Angeles which were operated in 1900, 1927, 1976, 1981, and 2001, each.
The routes’ length traveled by railway system has partially the similar pattern to the data opened. London – the maximum distances in kilometers of railway system routes – is recorded at 394. Then, there are the smaller number in Paris, Tokyo, and Washington DC that are while the former is listed at 199, the two latter are noted at 155 and 126 successively. Beside, Los Angeles and Kyoto has the minimum number in under about 30. Furthermore, It is clearly seen that Tokyo has the highest level of annual passengers using railway system (1927) which is followed by Paris, London, Washington DC, Los Angeles, and Kyoto having a different number, ranging from 1191 (Paris) to 50 (Los Angeles).
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 189, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, regarding, then, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1094.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 219.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99543378995 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41612494818 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552511415525 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 320.4 283.868780488 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.482926829268 1035% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9303514909 43.030603864 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.4 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.7 5.23603664747 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223900482661 0.215688989381 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10721301756 0.103423049105 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0790540666113 0.0843802449381 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166493015946 0.15604864568 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0927005906606 0.0819641961636 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 40.7170731707 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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