The table below shows information and predictions regarding the change in percentage of the population aged 65 and above in three countries.
The given table lists three countries current population and future predictions on citizens aged 65 and above. Three timelines given are 1988 and 2000,2030
The first country which is Canada had 16.36 percentage of 65 aged citizens. while Germany had the most highest percentage (20.45) between these three countries. And the UK had the smallest percentage of citizens aged 65 which is 14.23 percent. In the beginning of the 21st century, all three countries have shown growth with it is given citizen. When Canada's growth among elder citizend were four percent, while Germany's had more growth which is 5 percent. But UK showed only 0.5 percent
Their predictions about population in 2030 had almost similar growth with only small fractions of difference. The prediction shows that in 2030 Germany will remain it is top spot on elders populations with 30.42 percent , following Canada with 26.35 percent. And UK with the similar percentage with Canada in 2000 (20.35)
Overall, over the four decades Germany and Canada might have a ten percent growth with it is 65 and above aged population. When UK only gets six percent of growth6.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion: While
...d 16.36 percentage of 65 aged citizens. while Germany had the most highest percentage...
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...d 16.36 percentage of 65 aged citizens. while Germany had the most highest percentage...
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Suggestion: highest
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... percent. But UK showed only 0.5 percent Their predictions about population in 20...
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Suggestion: ,
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...ith it is 65 and above aged population. When UK only gets six percent of growth6.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 948.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 187.0 196.424390244 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06951871658 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47217997612 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550802139037 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.3073100074 43.030603864 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.1 5.23603664747 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225602382307 0.215688989381 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104635332751 0.103423049105 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0800823321427 0.0843802449381 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148964314529 0.15604864568 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0623300186886 0.0819641961636 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.