The table below shows information the change in percentage of the population aged 65 and above in three countries.
The table provides information about the proportions of the population 65 years old and over in three countries (Canada, Germany and UK ) in 12 years period starting from 1988.
Overall, the populations of three countries fluctuated steeply from 1988 to 2000. In fact, the number of Germany was highest in 1988, through the populations of UK fell slightly from 1988 to 2000.
The figures for Germany was 20.45% in 1988. After peaking at 20.45% in 1988 Germany’s population to decline sharply by 4.4% in 2000. This number was higher than in the other countries in 1988.
On the other hand, the percentage of the populations was 16.32% in 1988 in Canada higher than in the populations of UK by 2,09%. In 2000, this number of Canada a gradual rise to 20.67%, while the proportions of UK hit the lowest point of 12.68% in 2000.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
while, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 687.0 965.302439024 71% => OK
No of words: 144.0 196.424390244 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77083333333 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.46410161514 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67099439048 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 70.0 106.607317073 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.486111111111 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 180.0 283.868780488 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.2261073776 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.875 112.824112599 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.125 5.23603664747 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122917890592 0.215688989381 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0618804409216 0.103423049105 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0638129893534 0.0843802449381 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0900884657148 0.15604864568 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0570071805015 0.0819641961636 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 61.2550243902 128% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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