Table below shows the number of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the after it was refurnished The chart shows the result of surveys asking vsitors how satisfied they were with their visit during the same two periods

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Table below shows the number of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the after it was refurnished. The chart shows the result of surveys asking vsitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods.

The table shows the total numbers of visitors before and after the phase of renovation of the Ashdown Museum. The chart depicts the result of questionnaire related to the satisfaction level of the visitors while their visits before and after the time of refurnishing.
Overall, the number of visitors increased after the process of renovation and the relative number of satisfied visitors also increased remarkably.
Year before the refurnishing the museum, half of the total visitors were not satisfied with their visit, and among them, 10% people were very dissatisfied. Moreover, 30% and 15% of visitors expressed to be satisfied and very satisfied respectively. This leaves 5% of the people who refrained responding to the survey.
The year after the museum was refurnished, number of satisfied and very satisfied visitors increased to 40% and 35% respectively. One-fifth of the visitors expressed their dissatisfaction, from which 15% were dissatisfied and only 5% were very dissatisfied. The percentage of the visitors not participating in the survey remained same at 5%.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 913.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 168.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43452380952 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1417690667 2.65546596893 118% => OK
Unique words: 81.0 106.607317073 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.482142857143 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 283.5 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.4707915191 43.030603864 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.444444444 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.22222222222 5.23603664747 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.388440319555 0.215688989381 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.162995310795 0.103423049105 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0886738152553 0.0843802449381 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.236364768808 0.15604864568 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0705599248511 0.0819641961636 86% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.2329268293 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 61.2550243902 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 11.4140731707 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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