It has been always a burning concern how to decipher the skills helpful to be a leader. Some also believe that people are born as leaders; while others argue the leadership is a position that can be achieved only through hard work and passion. I firmly favor the view point with the path of hardship for being a leader, which will be based in the further essay.
To begin with, leading either a small team or a huge nation solely depends on the person's skill of management, which can only be taught by passionate studies and rich experience of hardship. Considering examples of the top most CEOs of almost all the multi-national organization, who have been the former students of popular universities of the globe, it can be postulated that the quality of education invariably decides the future of young people, especially if they want to pursue career in the field of politics or management. Additionally, the dedication, through which leaders engage in the betterment of cultures and societies, helps them to become a role models among communities. The more involvement of leaders in community, the better their skills are polished. In other words, time and hard work is absolutely needed to maintain the title of leadership.
On the other hand, hereditary factor also plays vital role in the pursuit of becoming monarch. For instance, several cultures allow the offspring to become the kings by birth only. Moreover, the genes of parents becomes predominant in the children; which means leadership skills are proffered to infants as soon as they are given births. Not only skills are imparted to the children, but also most of the rich families provides their children with colossal amount of wealth. After all, wealth becomes powerful tool to take advantage of studying in the most advanced and expensive institution such as Oxford University. Collectively, few people are adequately privileged who can directly be titled as 'The Prince' and a further few can be provided with inheritance directly from their parents; however, the rest would have to only develop their skills to lead.
In conclusion, based on the mentioned arguments above, my stand as 'necessity of proliferating the essential skill after birth to become a leader' has been deduced. By and large, hardship is the mother of leadership.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
... or a huge nation solely depends on the persons skill of management, which can only be ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... hereditary factor also plays vital role in the pursuit of becoming monarch. For ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, while, after all, for instance, in conclusion, such as, by and large, in other words, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1928.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 381.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06036745407 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78937308868 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574803149606 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 604.8 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.3345401316 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.5 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8125 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.75 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164602002086 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0548865289046 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0411481504322 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106698917567 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0369880558843 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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