The table below shows the number of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same period.
The table shows the amount of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the years before and after the renovation of this museum. Besides, the pie charts shows the resut of surveys about asking people how satisfied they were during the same two periods.
Generally, after refurbished, Ashdown Museum is attracted more visitorsand they feel satisfied then before refurbishment.
It is clear the table chart show that the numbers of visitors increased significantly after the renovation from 74000 before the reconstruction to 92000 after it had been done.
Now lets lookat the pie charts. The year before refurbishment shows a neagative emotions. The result of surveys illustrate that only 15% of visitors felt very satisfied while the percentage of dissatisfied peoples was 40%. On the other hand, the year after refurbishment illustrate that the percentage of dissatisfied travelers declined dramatically and become only15%. In addition, peoples who felt very satisfied rose to 35%. Comparing the proportion of satisfied visitors, it has tend to increased from 30% to 40% after renovation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 483, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'tended'.
Suggestion: tended
...roportion of satisfied visitors, it has tend to increased from 30% to 40% after reno...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, look, then, while, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 918.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 168.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46428571429 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9812338221 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.8158849027 43.030603864 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8 22.9334400587 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 5.23603664747 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.488734307732 0.215688989381 227% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.168573286696 0.103423049105 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13257358353 0.0843802449381 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.289901038679 0.15604864568 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.157879453684 0.0819641961636 193% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.2329268293 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.09 11.4140731707 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.