The table illustrates the number of visitors to Ashdown Museum before and after it was renovated. The charts demonstrate satisfaction of visitors after this modernization.
The number of visitors to the museum has increased significantly. A quantity of people who very satisfied and just satisfied has risen. While the number of visitors who were dissatisfied has decreased. And quantities of person who no response has not changed.
During the year before renovated, the number of comers was 74.000 and after refurbished it has grown and made up 92.000 visitors. The survey said that visitors who very satisfied were 15 and it much less than it has become 35 in the year after modernization. Also, the number of comers who were satisfied has grown up and came to 40, while it the year early it was less 30. And visitors who were dissatisfied and very dissatisfied has decreased by half. And it clear to see that no reason was 5 and has not altered.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...of visitors after this modernization. The number of visitors to the museum has in...
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Line 2, column 137, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...satisfied and just satisfied has risen. While the number of visitors who were dissati...
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Line 3, column 113, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ter refurbished it has grown and made up 92.000 visitors. The survey said that vi...
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Line 3, column 463, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'clears'?
Suggestion: clears
...satisfied has decreased by half. And it clear to see that no reason was 5 and has not...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 791.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8527607362 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88052326493 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 75.0 106.607317073 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.460122699387 0.547539520022 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 244.8 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.1890772765 43.030603864 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.9090909091 112.824112599 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8181818182 22.9334400587 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.72727272727 5.23603664747 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330798864416 0.215688989381 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133921253963 0.103423049105 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0844497183052 0.0843802449381 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239797619245 0.15604864568 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0676032333166 0.0819641961636 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.2329268293 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 61.2550243902 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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