The table illustrates the information of the number of people and the types of living accommodation of three particular areas of a city.
Overall, according to the data table, more persons live in the central area, where most people are detached, while the flat is the main type of accommodation of the green park area and terraced for the south berg.
To begin, 76% of the green park residence stay in a flat, while it is 25 and 15 percent for south berg and central area respectively. Then the second type of living space is terraced, 18% of the total population of the central park live on the terrace. Whereas in this case, south berg is on the top more than half of the summing people choose terrace as their accommodation and the difference with the green park is 42%.
Turning to the other twos, in terms of semi-detached central park community is most than all other places and the percent is 28 which is more than 5 times than the mentioned places. In this case, the rest of the areas have the same percent (5%). Finally, detached, the portion of people in the central park is 3 and almost 8 times higher than the south berg and green park areas.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 345, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to terrace'
Suggestion: to terrace
... than half of the summing people choose terrace as their accommodation and the differen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, second, so, then, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 952.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 211.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51184834123 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46522955381 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.483412322275 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 288.9 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6715288571 43.030603864 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.0 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.375 22.9334400587 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.625 5.23603664747 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11821602966 0.215688989381 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0676100076105 0.103423049105 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0719688916171 0.0843802449381 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10603047903 0.15604864568 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0679461161782 0.0819641961636 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.2329268293 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 11.4140731707 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.