The given chart gives information on the survey given by club members and general public for the new theatre in town in 2012.
Overall, it can be clearly seen that most of opinions were thought excellent while the percentage of people who informed poor is the lowest.
In terms of facilities, the proportion of club members who answered excellent and satisfied stood at 72% and 64%, which was higher slightly than general public at 64% and 24% respectively. Whereas there was 8% general public who ranked poor for facilities, 4 times as much as their counterparts. In terms of information, over half of club member asked excellent lower than general public at 66%. People in public who satisfied with information accounted for 20% compared with over one third of club members. Both people in two group felt dissatisfied nearly similar about 15%.
Turning to the quality of the new theatre, we can see that the vast majority of members in club voted excellent while only 53% of public voted so. Both satisfied and dissatisfied people in club are fewer than those in public.
- Some people think that children should begin their formal education at a very early age. Some think they should begin at least 7 years old. Discuss both views give opinions ? 89
- Some People think that schools should select students according to their academic abilities while others believe that it is better to have students with different abilities study together Discuss both views and state your own opinion 78
- Some people believe that government should take care of old people and provide financial support after they retire Others say individual should save during their working years to fund their own retirement What is your opinion Give reasons for your answer 84
- Some people say economic development is necessary to reduce the poverty in the world Others say that economic growth should be stop immediately to stop damaging the environment Discuss both sides and give your opinion 87
- Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams like football While other people think that taking part in individual sports is better like tennis or swimming Discuss both views and give your own opinion 95
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 75, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...on the survey given by club members and general public for the new theatre in town in 2012. ...
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Line 3, column 38, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the opinions') or simply say ''most opinions''.
Suggestion: most of the opinions; most opinions
... Overall, it can be clearly seen that most of opinions were thought excellent while the percen...
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Line 5, column 146, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...and 64%, which was higher slightly than general public at 64% and 24% respectively. Whereas th...
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Line 5, column 211, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
... 24% respectively. Whereas there was 8% general public who ranked poor for facilities, 4 times...
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Line 5, column 374, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
... club member asked excellent lower than general public at 66%. People in public who satisfied ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, third, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 897.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 183.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90163934426 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59856606843 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579234972678 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7545183136 43.030603864 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6666666667 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.77777777778 5.23603664747 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316612603177 0.215688989381 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131366291063 0.103423049105 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0954321992686 0.0843802449381 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193335632703 0.15604864568 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125059702221 0.0819641961636 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.