Living in big cities means people might have more occupational opportunities and benefits from the advanced infrastructure. Nonetheless, the process of urbanization has also placed an enormous burden on citizens of metropolitan areas, as we shall see.
Probably the most obvious and chronic issue that people living in big cities have to cope with is traffic congestion. In all likelihood, it impacts negatively on the transport systems and many other aspects of life, ranging from environment, health to financial problems. People in large cities have also witnessed the increasing rate of crime, and perhaps more critically, the higher incidence of juvenile delinquency. Besides other reasons, this can be explained that when parents have to work around the clock for affording high expenses such as house, food, taxes or health care, they are less likely to have time to take care of their children properly. More importantly, the fast pace of city life might inevitably cause serious mental and psychological issues such as depression or anxiety disorders, leading to tremendous disruptions to personal life.
There are several solutions to tackle the above-mentioned problems, and moving people to the outskirts or lower population density areas appears to be possible in some way. Particularly, this might ease the pressure caused by overpopulation in big cities and thus facilitate social improvements. For example, people will be able to have more chances to approach better educational and medical systems. Also, daily commuting probably costs less time and money because traffic congestion may be less severe. However, it is crucial for authorities to analyze the possibility of relocating plans rigorously in terms of environmental and other social aspects to minimize any familiar problems happening in former places.
In conclusion, it is inevitable that metropolitan citizens have to deal with a variety of disadvantages caused by the negative impacts of urbanization, and relocating people to the suburbs or smaller towns could be an advisable solution.
- Watching a live performance such as a play concert or sporting event is more enjoyable than watching the same event on television To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 89
- Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations Discuss both these views and give your opinion 67
- Few languages are increasingly spoken in different countries, while the usage of others is rapidly declining. Is this a positive or a negative development? 78
- Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems 78
- In some countries owing a home rather than renting one is very important for people Why might this be the case Do you think it is a positive or negative situation 67
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, may, nonetheless, so, thus, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1762.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54088050314 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07837704083 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625786163522 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 570.6 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.694525356 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.538461538 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4615384615 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178535668977 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0600391442071 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.040382619885 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100401224117 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0217376385029 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.15 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.39 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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