The table illustrate the results of survey that asked 6800 Scottish adults (aged 16 years and over) whether they had taken part in different cultural activities in the past 12 months. Overall, any performance like dancing, singing, playing musical instrument have more participants than any other cultural activities.
To begin, any performance like dancing, singing, and playing musical instruments have a increase number of 22% in all aged 16 and over. Adults aged 16 to 24 are more with 35% in this scenario. Those participants undertaking any crafts have 19% in all aged 16. Although, 25-44 age showing 17% of numbers but 45-74 aged ones are 22% when it comes to crafts, therefore adults of this age is more likely to do crafts than any other cultural activities. Cultural purchase participants are 16% in numbers in all aged 16 and over, adults of 45 -74 are 18% in this category. Any visual arts is showing higher participation power when it comes to age group of 16-24 were it is 30%, but all aged 16 and over are less in number with 15%, which means Adults of 16-24 ages are more interested in visual arts.
According to the survey table, Any writing participants are 17% in the age group of 16-24, when it come to all aged 16 and over it is just 7%,it clearly show there less interest in writing activities. Moreover computer based participated are 10% for 16-24 ages, All aged 16 and over is of 6%, no interests are shown by the adults in computer based cultural activities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'illustrates'.
Suggestion: illustrates
The table illustrate the results of survey that asked 6800 S...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...g, and playing musical instruments have a increase number of 22% in all aged 16 a...
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Line 2, column 657, Rule ID: WERE_VBB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'where' or 'we'?
Suggestion: where; we
...wer when it comes to age group of 16-24 were it is 30%, but all aged 16 and over are...
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Line 2, column 702, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: less
...it is 30%, but all aged 16 and over are less in number with 15%, which means Adults of 16-24 a...
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Line 3, column 100, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'comes'?
Suggestion: comes
... 17% in the age group of 16-24, when it come to all aged 16 and over it is just 7%,i...
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Line 3, column 154, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'shows'?
Suggestion: shows
...ed 16 and over it is just 7%,it clearly show there less interest in writing activiti...
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Line 3, column 201, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...re less interest in writing activities. Moreover computer based participated are 10% for...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1225.0 965.302439024 127% => OK
No of words: 260.0 196.424390244 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71153846154 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60841548856 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 106.607317073 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.484615384615 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 376.2 283.868780488 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5620201262 43.030603864 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.5 112.824112599 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 22.9334400587 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8 5.23603664747 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.360142454392 0.215688989381 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.185145016999 0.103423049105 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.212957111873 0.0843802449381 252% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.302872818052 0.15604864568 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.162203873935 0.0819641961636 198% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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