The graph and bar chart below show the average monthly rainfall and temperature for one region of East Africa Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant Write at least 150 words

The graph illustrates average monthly rainfall and temperature of a year. It can be specified through prescribed measuring units, for rainfall it is millimeters and temperature in Celsius.
Overall, the graph displays the months in which rainfall was higher during a year. It also shows the affect and change in temperature during particular months when there is less and more rainfall.
To begin with, temperature from January to march it shows subsequent increase of 22.0 to 24.0 Celsius. From the month of April to July it shows continuous drop on temperature from 23.5 to around 20.7 Degree Celsius. During subsequent months from August to October there is rapid increase in temperature, from 20.5 to 23.5 degree Celsius. Thereafter, it shows a fall during the month of November and December from 22.5 to 21.5 degree Celsius.
During the first quarter of the year, month of April has maximum rainfall which is of 300 millimeters. Moreover, the highest rainfall of the year was on April. Looking into second quarter of the year October and November has comparatively the same rainfall which is around 140 to 150. All other are having lesser rainfall during this particular year. The graph clearly explains that, the rainfall has greater influence over Temperature.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, moreover, second, so, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1065.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 206.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16990291262 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71002944466 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 306.0 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.1310366537 43.030603864 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.9230769231 112.824112599 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8461538462 22.9334400587 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46153846154 5.23603664747 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162654197553 0.215688989381 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0752247193529 0.103423049105 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497923079969 0.0843802449381 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119864898174 0.15604864568 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459446059179 0.0819641961636 56% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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