The Table below shows the results of a survey that asked 6800 Scottish adults (aged 16 years and over) whether they had taken part in different cultural activities in the past 12 months.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The table compares participation in six cultural activities of 6800 Scottish people who aged 16 and above, in 12 months
Overall, any performance including dancing, singing, playing musical instruments and acting was the most popular activity among all age groups, whereas, in terms of any writing and computer based, with the exception of people from 16 to 24, these activities had the least number of joiners
People between 16 to 24 showed a strong preference towards any performance with 35% of them took part in these activities, which was 13% higher than that of people aged 25-44. Visual arts was also really popular when it was chosen by 30% of the adolecents from 16 to 24. While 17% of these people participated in writing, the remaining acitivities just attracted around 10% to 11% of them. With regards to the adults between 25 to 44, the fgure for undertaking crafts, cultural purchases and visual arts was nearly even, which was around 16 to 17% while the remaning figures were not over 10%
In contrast, there was a major number of participants aged 45-74 took part in undertaking any craft, at 22% which was the percentage for people from 16 and above choosing any performances. Any performance and cultural purchases were also mostly enjoyed by people from 45 to 74 with 17% and 18% respectively while their least favourite activities allocated to writing and computer based, with the same figure at 5%. People aged 16 and over also bore some resemblance to this when there was merely around 6% of them took part in these activities while the figures for cultural purchases and any visual arts were higher, at 16% and 15% respectively
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 198, Rule ID: WITH_THE_EXCEPTION_OF[1]
Message: Use simply 'except' or 'except for'
Suggestion: except; except for
...erms of any writing and computer based, with the exception of people from 16 to 24, these activities ...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...re higher, at 16% and 15% respectively
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, really, so, whereas, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 33.7804878049 157% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1378.0 965.302439024 143% => OK
No of words: 281.0 196.424390244 143% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90391459075 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 3.73543355544 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66126031329 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 106.607317073 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505338078292 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 411.3 283.868780488 145% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 46.0 22.4926829268 205% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 169.786794409 43.030603864 395% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 229.666666667 112.824112599 204% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 46.8333333333 22.9334400587 204% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 7.5 5.23603664747 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148402722471 0.215688989381 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0741582801053 0.103423049105 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0628809619146 0.0843802449381 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132676266444 0.15604864568 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0839712440474 0.0819641961636 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.1 13.2329268293 190% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.25 61.2550243902 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.1 10.3012195122 195% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.03 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 11.4329268293 245% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.4 10.9970731707 186% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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