The table below shows the results of a survey to find out what members of a city sports club think about the club’s activities, facilities and opening hours.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make any comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.
The given table compares the opinions of the female and male members about a particular club's activities, amenities, and working hours.
Overall, it is clear that female members significantly agree with the club's opening hours while their counterparts are more inclined towards facilities.
To be more specific, regarding the range of activities, female members expressed nearly equal opinions on all three levels of enjoyment, accounting for approximately 35% to 30%. Meanwhile, more than half of male members, at 55%, expressed high satisfaction with it.
In terms of club facilities and working hours, firstly, it is obvious that over 60% of the sports club's members were thoroughly satisfied with the equipment, while only about 10% to 14% of them were discontented. Then, regarding a strong preference for the club's opening time, females surveyed accounted for 72%, meaning that there was only a negligible proportion of them expressed dissatisfaction. A different pattern was seen in that for males when the percentage of contented and discontented were relatively approximate, standing at around 40%..
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 549, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...vely approximate, standing at around 40%..
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, regarding, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 948.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 170.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57647058824 4.92477711251 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0644970009 2.65546596893 115% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641176470588 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2712068109 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.428571429 112.824112599 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2857142857 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159196892383 0.215688989381 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0745392423767 0.103423049105 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0625023837849 0.0843802449381 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102964343443 0.15604864568 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0510736379343 0.0819641961636 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.2329268293 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 61.2550243902 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.38 11.4140731707 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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