The table below shows the results of a survey to find out what members of a city sports club think about the club s activities facilities and opening hours Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make any comparisons whe

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The table below shows the results of a survey to find out what members of a city sports club think about the club’s activities, facilities and opening hours.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make any comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.

The provided table presents a comparison of the views held by female and male members regarding various aspects of a city sports club, including its activities, facilities, and opening hours.

Overall, it is evident that female members express a high level of satisfaction with the club's opening hours, whereas their male counterparts are more focused on the club's facilities.

Regarding the range of activities offered by the club, female members show relatively equal levels of satisfaction across all three categories, ranging from approximately 30% to 35%. In contrast, a majority of male members express a high degree of satisfaction with these activities, with more than half indicating their contentment.

Turning to the club's facilities and working hours, the data reveals that over 60% of club members, irrespective of gender, are highly satisfied with the equipment provided. Dissatisfaction with the facilities is relatively low, ranging from 10% to 14% across both genders.

In terms of the club's opening hours, a significant 72% of female respondents express great satisfaction, indicating a strong preference for the existing schedule. In contrast, male members show a more mixed response, with approximately 40% expressing satisfaction and a similar percentage indicating some level of dissatisfaction.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, regarding, so, whereas, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1132.0 965.302439024 117% => OK
No of words: 198.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.71717171717 4.92477711251 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22695260896 2.65546596893 122% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565656565657 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 344.7 283.868780488 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.1742065202 43.030603864 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.5 112.824112599 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.75 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.875 5.23603664747 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180479346949 0.215688989381 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0878590979336 0.103423049105 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054192314099 0.0843802449381 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117658342548 0.15604864568 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0400132115322 0.0819641961636 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.2329268293 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 61.2550243902 63% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.19 11.4140731707 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.06136585366 117% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 40.7170731707 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 11.4329268293 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.0658536585 145% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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