Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Immigrating to other countries in pursuit of happiness and prosperity is the main feature of modernity. Given that the language of the new country may be different from the country of origin, some plausible social and personal problems may be aroused accordingly. I hold the view that regardless of the benefits offered by the new society, immigrants might face numerous problems, which will be examined here.
Having spent several years in a country with particular norms and values, one can find it hard to adapt himself to the new culture, leading to social conflicts and issues eventually. For instance, being labelled as an “immigrant” a person may face an identity crisis and tension would be exerted between the foreigners and locals. The ability to speak fluently and correctly, on the other hand, might seem hard, thus communication in the new language with the local people seems to be complicated. An example can be seen in the workplace, where the manager requests for document preparation and the foreign employee does not get the exact details properly to include in the file, which might be followed by punishment of unemployment.
Admittedly, moving abroad could benefit people in various ways. The main positive advantage would be the higher quality of life in terms of education, leisure activities, and even social rules. For instance, the children of a Muslim family can take advantage of the freedom that bears no comparison with the one in the original country.
To sum up, I firmly believe, that immigration, by and large, can pose serious stress and problems on human life despite the benefits and opportunities they can reap from. Therefore, such decisions should be taken wisely and thoughtfully to thwart any issues in the community and personal life collectively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, if, may, so, therefore, thus, even so, for instance, by and large, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1515.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18835616438 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85568595908 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599315068493 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6823740157 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.25 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145973245379 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0501543340202 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444634207817 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0833385870054 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0239463274047 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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