The table below shows the salaries of secondary high school teachers in 2009

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The table below shows the salaries of secondary/high school teachers in 2009

The table gives information about how much high school teachers earned in different five countries in 2009.
In general, teachers were the most highly paid in Luxembourg while Australian teachers are paid lower salaries than in other countries in 2009. It can be seen that both in Australia and Denmark, teachers spent the least time to have the maximum wages.
Teachers in Australia started their job with the lowest pay, at only 28,000 while those who had 15 years of experience earned 48,000. Nearly 40,000 more 15-year-experience teachers than newcomers were paid in Luxembourg, at 80,000 and 119,000. This figure is much higher than in other regions. The salaries of experienced teachers who were in Korea, Denmark, and Japan accounted for 48,000, 54,000, and 62,000 respectively.
In terms of maximum salary and time to reach it, teachers in both Japan and Luxembourg earned the highest wage and spent more than 30 years to gain. In contrast, it took both Australian and Denmark teachers 8 to 9 years to reach the maximum salary.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 235, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s were paid in Luxembourg, at 80,000 and 119,000. This figure is much higher than...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, while, in contrast, in general

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 871.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 172.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06395348837 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6708963155 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56976744186 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 236.7 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.1797580797 43.030603864 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.7777777778 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1111111111 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.77777777778 5.23603664747 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206150537117 0.215688989381 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0952419924478 0.103423049105 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0921817868465 0.0843802449381 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160974578046 0.15604864568 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0921701683521 0.0819641961636 112% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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