The table below shows a survey on the preference of different age groups in a European country on different TV programmes in 2012 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

Given is the table contrasting the percentage of age groups in a European country on different TV programmes.
Perceptibly, the age group prefers watching cartoons and films to News, Opera or dramas. While the reverse option appears in two other groups.
In the first age group , the rate of watching is highest at 29% and lower is Sports with 22%, following that the rate of Feature Films at 18 % and Soap Opera at 17%. The News and TV dramas are not demands of this group, it shows in the rate at 6% and 8%.In the second group age, the highest demand is Feature films with 23%, the lower rate is News. The percentage in both of Cartoons and Sports are 18.The lowest demands are Opera and dramas at 12% and 10 %. The last group age, Cartoon and TV dramas are not demands of this ground, the rate of these programs are 4% and 13%. The highest demands are News and Sports with 23% and 21%, the lowers are Films and Opera at 20% and 19%.

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Average: 6.1 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ws and TV dramas are not demands of this group, it shows in the rate at 6% and 8%...
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...roup, it shows in the rate at 6% and 8%.In the second group age, the highest deman...
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...s Feature films with 23%, the lower rate is News. The percentage in both of Carto...
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...ercentage in both of Cartoons and Sports are 18.The lowest demands are Opera and ...
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... in both of Cartoons and Sports are 18.The lowest demands are Opera and dramas at ...
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...west demands are Opera and dramas at 12% and 10 %. The last group age, Cartoon an...
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... are Opera and dramas at 12% and 10 %. The last group age, Cartoon and TV dramas a...
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... rate of these programs are 4% and 13%. The highest demands are News and Sports wit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 6.8 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 760.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 175.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.34285714286 4.92477711251 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.14256435078 2.65546596893 81% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.497142857143 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 216.0 283.868780488 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 11.0 4.33902439024 254% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7225709374 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.875 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.23603664747 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156830141771 0.215688989381 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0871085575752 0.103423049105 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100054157011 0.0843802449381 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161572529412 0.15604864568 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112984198178 0.0819641961636 138% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.0 61.2550243902 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.89 11.4140731707 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 8.06136585366 87% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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