The table below shows the television viewing figures for sports by country, in millions

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The table below shows the television viewing figures for sports by country, in millions

The table shows the number of people in milions, who come from four different countries,watch sports on televison.There are four types of sports: tennis, golf, motor racing and atheletics. As can be seen from the table, tennis is the sport that has the highest figures for people watch on televison and the number of sport viewers concentrated most in usa and uk. In all four nationalities, tennis account for nearly 26 milion viewers in total and about 6-7 milion people see tennis on tv in each country.Many American like watching golf, 11.2 million of America people watch golf on tv but golf is not popular in other 3 countries, especially in uk, just 2.8 million people enjoy watching golf. atheletics is more common in usa and uk than in Australia and canada, few australian enjoy watching atheletics.Motor racing is the sport that has the least number of viewers on tv. In usa and canada, just less than 1.5 milion people watch it.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: There
...ent countries,watch sports on televison.There are four types of sports: tennis, golf,...
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Suggestion: Many
...people see tennis on tv in each country.Many American like watching golf, 11.2 milli...
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Line 1, column 697, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Atheletics
...2.8 million people enjoy watching golf. atheletics is more common in usa and uk than in Au...
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Suggestion: Motor
...ew australian enjoy watching atheletics.Motor racing is the sport that has the least ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 777.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 162.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7962962963 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78252680461 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574074074074 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 229.5 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 22.4926829268 142% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.8263362844 43.030603864 199% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.4 112.824112599 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.4 22.9334400587 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.2 5.23603664747 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142643591395 0.215688989381 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0770456036943 0.103423049105 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551019782093 0.0843802449381 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142643591395 0.15604864568 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.2329268293 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.92 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 11.4329268293 171% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.9970731707 135% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 11.0658536585 181% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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