The table below shows the worldwide market share of the notebook computer market for manufacturers in the year 2006, 2007 and 2014

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The table below shows the worldwide market share of the notebook computer market for manufacturers in the year 2006, 2007 and 2014

The table compares the market share of top notebook computer brands in the world in 2006, 2007 and 2014.

Overall, HP made up for the largest worldwide market share in the three years. While there was an increase in the proportion of products of HP, Dell, and Toshiba, a fluctuation was witnessed by the rest.

Being the notebook computer market leader in 2006, HP held approximately one-third of the market share and remained the top position with a slight improvement by around 3% in 2007 and 2014. A similar increase was also experienced by the percentage of computers produced by Dell and Toshiba to just above 26 and 8%, respectively, in 2014.

In contrast, only 4.8% share of laptop market was held by Fujitsu and this is the lowest proportion of computers manufactured in the market in the three years despite a recovery from 2.4% in 2007 to 3.1% in 2014. Similarly, the figures for Samsung and Lenovo experienced a gradual fluctuation to 14.2% and 7.1%, respectively in 2014. Besides, other brands accounted for 22%, which was the nearest competitor of Nokia in 2006, and 7.11% in 2014.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 446, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...or of Nokia in 2006, and 7.11% in 2014.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, similarly, so, third, while, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 918.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 188.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8829787234 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74162785836 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521276595745 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.083250825 43.030603864 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.75 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.875 5.23603664747 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.473410060172 0.215688989381 219% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.204302290283 0.103423049105 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.155455193588 0.0843802449381 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.309074761794 0.15604864568 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120176233711 0.0819641961636 147% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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