The table below summarises some data collected by a college bookshop for the month of February 2000

The tabular chart reveals the number of books prepared by diffrent members from the bookstore during 2000.

It is evident from the the chart that out of total 3134 books,almost one third of books purchased by club members while,remaing booms taken by non book club members.Non fiction books were most common among members of club as the count for these books was highest was 942.In contrast, college students showed greatest interest in taking books and biggest preference was magzines was borrowed 1249 units of mahzines.

Secondly,the same trend were seen by staff because they also choose magzines most that was count 332.The liking of fiction books was similar to public club members.public members was borrowed 122 books related to non fiction books.Preference of fiction books was least total 151 wad borrowed equally by two kinds members.

All in all,the magzines was highly liked all persons whereas fiction related content least popular.

Votes
Average: 4 (3 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, second, secondly, so, third, whereas, while, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 805.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 151.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33112582781 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57912799845 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622516556291 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 223.2 283.868780488 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 22.4926829268 164% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 137.197849837 43.030603864 319% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 201.25 112.824112599 178% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.75 22.9334400587 165% => OK
Discourse Markers: 16.5 5.23603664747 315% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 1.69756097561 825% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0242619312008 0.215688989381 11% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0187038666667 0.103423049105 18% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0192755284184 0.0843802449381 23% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0187038666667 0.15604864568 12% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0192755284184 0.0819641961636 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.5 13.2329268293 170% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.38 61.2550243902 69% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.5 10.3012195122 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.23 11.4140731707 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.06136585366 118% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 11.4329268293 149% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.9970731707 153% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.0658536585 154% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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