The table below summarises some data collected by a college bookshop for the month of February 2000

The tabular chart illustrates information about the quantity of Fiction, Non-Fiction and Magazines were sold to Non-Book Club Members and Book Club Members in February 2000.

Overall, while the Magazines had the higher sales than others, the Fiction had the lowest sales in the chart.

It is clearly to see that in Non-Book Club Members, the Magazines was quite popular with College Staff and College Students which it was cost 332 and 1228 in February. However, while Fiction had slightly better revenue than Non-Fiction for College Staff, Non-Fiction had 6 times more revenue than Fiction for College Students. For the Members of Public, Non-Fiction had a higher total value than Magazines, and Fiction was not their concern.

In Book Club Members, the difference was very clear when Non-Fiction had the highest sales of the 3 types of books with nearly $ 950. Magazines became the lowest-grossing book category at just $36, but Fiction was only marginally better in terms of total value.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 205, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'bettered', 'welled'.
Suggestion: bettered; welled
...ry. However, while Fiction had slightly better revenue than Non-Fiction for College St...
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Line 7, column 128, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '$950'.
Suggestion: $950
...les of the 3 types of books with nearly $ 950. Magazines became the lowest-grossing b...
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 33.7804878049 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 13.0 3.97073170732 327% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 836.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 161.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19254658385 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63264187295 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55900621118 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 241.2 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.0619947601 43.030603864 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 119.428571429 112.824112599 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.85714285714 5.23603664747 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0690210523785 0.215688989381 32% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0352244583883 0.103423049105 34% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0339917851034 0.0843802449381 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0373685640973 0.15604864568 24% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0397210262043 0.0819641961636 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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