The table gives information about oversea travelers from 5 different areas in 4 specific years: 1990,1995,2000 and 2002. Overall, it can be seen that while 4 other areas shared an upward trend in the number of travelers, the U.S manifest a up and down in the surveyed period. Additionally, European visitors were most likely to travel abroad whereas Middle West people had the least number of people who went to foreign countries.
Looking first at the year of 1990, it is apparent that Europeans made up more than half of the total traveler number with 280.2 million out of 448.9 million.The number increased gradually through time and in 2005, it remained its first rank with 400.2 million. A similar rising movement is noticed in Middle West and Africa where their data grew slowly from 9.8 millon and 18.2 million in the beginning to 15.8 million and 28.7 million respectively. Hence, Middle West was the region that hold the lowest position, consisting of only 2% of total number in the last year of the survey.
On the other hand, despite the fact that there had been an initial increase from 80.5 million to 118.2 million within the next 10 years, the U.S data soon dropped to 113.2 million 5 years later which led to a replacement in the table status, making Asia and the Pacific with a remarkable growth of about 75 million to 135.8 million travelers the second rank in the table.
- The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990 1995 2000 and 2005 million Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant 93
- The graph and chart give information and forecast about the vehicle number and CO2 emission in England and Wales between 2000 and 2020 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons where relevant 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...trend in the number of travelers, the U.S manifest a up and down in the surveyed ...
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...e number of travelers, the U.S manifest a up and down in the surveyed period. Add...
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...with 280.2 million out of 448.9 million.The number increased gradually through time...
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...million within the next 10 years, the U.S data soon dropped to 113.2 million 5 ye...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, look, second, so, whereas, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1156.0 965.302439024 120% => OK
No of words: 242.0 196.424390244 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77685950413 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43856276273 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 106.607317073 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615702479339 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 324.9 283.868780488 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 22.4926829268 151% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.7400650673 43.030603864 192% => OK
Chars per sentence: 165.142857143 112.824112599 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.5714285714 22.9334400587 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.85714285714 5.23603664747 188% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202663769415 0.215688989381 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0893773612528 0.103423049105 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0640076054809 0.0843802449381 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133868860311 0.15604864568 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0273872907623 0.0819641961636 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 13.2329268293 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.35 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.04 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.9970731707 142% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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