The table illustrates the all time top Olympics medals in several sports and the line graph depicts the number of rewards earned by five different countries in all Olympics

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The table illustrates the all-time top Olympics medals in several sports, and the line graph depicts the number of rewards earned by five different countries in all Olympics.

The table illustrates the all-time top Olympics medals in several sports, and the line graph depicts the number of rewards earned by five different countries in all Olympics.
Overall, the American athlete won the most medals in Swimming, while the sportsmen from Norway and the USSR gained the least in Biathlon and Gymnastics, respectively. In addition, the USA was the country with the highest awards won.
Looking at the table more closely, Michael Phelps gained the majority of medals in the Olympics' swimming field with 22. By contrast, Ole Einar and Borys Shakhlin obtained the smallest number of plaques in Biathlon and Gymnastics, each with 13 medals. Additionally, Larysa acquired 18 medals in Gymnastics, which was 3 more than Nikolai.
According to the line chart, the United States has the greatest quantity of crests in the Olympics with nearly 2700 medals, about five times that of Italy. Furthermore, the USSR received approximately 1200, more than twice as many as Germany. Finally, Great Britain achieved almost 700 ribbons.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, furthermore, if, look, while, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 881.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 167.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2754491018 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6393535924 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646706586826 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.5025779901 43.030603864 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8888888889 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5555555556 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55555555556 5.23603664747 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.382829101624 0.215688989381 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138468674535 0.103423049105 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.259005994098 0.0843802449381 307% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.274498982669 0.15604864568 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.3380660353 0.0819641961636 412% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.2329268293 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.06136585366 118% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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