The table illustrates the all time top Olympics medals in several sports and the line graph depicts the number of rewards earned by five different countries in all Olympics

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The table illustrates the all-time top Olympics medals in several sports, and the line graph depicts the number of rewards earned by five different countries in all Olympics.

The table illustrates the all-time top Olympics medals in several sports, and the line graph depicts the number of rewards earned by five different countries in all Olympics.
Overall, the American athlete won the most decorations in Swimming, while the sportsmen from Norway and the USSR gained the least in Biathlon and Gymnastics. In addition, the USA was the country with the highest number of prizes won.
Looking at the table more closely, Michael Phelps of the USA achieved the majority of crests in the Olympics' swimming field with 22 honors. By contrast, the athletes from Norway and USSR obtained the smallest number of plaques in Biathlon and Gymnastics, each with 13 medals. Additionally, Larysa acquired 18 medals in Gymnastics, which was 3 more than Nikolai.
According to the line chart, the United States had the greatest quantity of crests in the Olympics with nearly 2700 plaques, which was about two times higher than that of the USSR. In contrast, Italy reached the lowest point at around 600 medals. Furthermore, Germany received approximately 800 and as many as the UK.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, look, while, in addition, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 917.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 180.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09444444444 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61039588313 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605555555556 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.774675581 43.030603864 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.888888889 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338807418829 0.215688989381 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130230893623 0.103423049105 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.259944270959 0.0843802449381 308% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.263626402828 0.15604864568 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.343848798998 0.0819641961636 420% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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