The table shows the amount of coal used by different sectors in the UK

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The table shows the amount of coal used by different sectors in the UK.

The given table illustrates how many million tons of coal used by five major energy consumers in the UK over a period between 1975 and 2000.
Overall, what stands out from the table is that there were considerable downward trends in coal consumption in total and by the major sectors in UK’s economy. Over the period, Power stations remained as a leader in coal consumption, on the other hand, Services represented as the least consumer.
According to the 1975 year, the coal consumption in the UK’s economy was the record over the period at 121.2 million tons. When looking at the details, the quality of coal in electricity production was the biggest figure at 77.2 million tons among the considered sectors, almost 60 percent of the total, nearly four times more than the second place as Domestic and nearly 20 times more the last place as Service at 4.2 million tons.
Power stations consumed coal most at 77.2 million tons in 1970 and reached a record in 1980 at 89.6 million tons. After that the coal consumption gradually dropped to 47.1 million tons, however, it remained the biggest coal user in the economy. Similarly, numbers in million tons of coal consumption dramatically went down with almost 8 times less in Domestic, 6 times less in Industry, and 7 times less in Service sectors, at 2.6, 3.2, 0.6 million tons, respectively in 2000.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 268, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, look, second, similarly, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1133.0 965.302439024 117% => OK
No of words: 232.0 196.424390244 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88362068966 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56276371863 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 106.607317073 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530172413793 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 329.4 283.868780488 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.0772096323 43.030603864 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.625 112.824112599 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 22.9334400587 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 5.23603664747 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164826792647 0.215688989381 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0935830620485 0.103423049105 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0684941596343 0.0843802449381 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129826329319 0.15604864568 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0636895861159 0.0819641961636 78% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.2329268293 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.3012195122 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.62 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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