The table gives information about the cost of water in 5 cities in Australia include to Adelaide,Brisbane,Melbourne,Perth,Sydney
Overall, the cost of water of every place is different. when people usage change per kiloliter up to 125 Kl, people of Adelaide and Perth is the lowest pay. However people use over 125 Kl, Perth's must the highest pay.
As can be seen that the cost of water of people use up to 125 Kl in Sydney is the highest over 0.98$. Following by Brisbane with 0.81$. In addition people in Perth and Adelaide is the lowest pay for cost water over 0.42$. However the average bill per household of Perth is take the lead with 332$
According to the table the cost water of people use over 125 KL in Melbourne is the lowest over 0.78$. In addition the average bill per household of it also the lowest about 253$. Adelaide stand at lever 2 of the price water of people use over 125 KL over 1$. Following by Sydney with 0.84$.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 97, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Brisbane
... cities in Australia include to Adelaide,Brisbane,Melbourne,Perth,Sydney Overall, the c...
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Line 1, column 116, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Perth
...a include to Adelaide,Brisbane,Melbourne,Perth,Sydney Overall, the cost of water of ...
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Line 1, column 129, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...Adelaide,Brisbane,Melbourne,Perth,Sydney Overall, the cost of water of every plac...
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Line 2, column 57, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: When
...t of water of every place is different. when people usage change per kiloliter up to...
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Line 2, column 158, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...f Adelaide and Perth is the lowest pay. However people use over 125 Kl, Perths must the...
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Line 2, column 219, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...er 125 Kl, Perths must the highest pay. As can be seen that the cost of water of p...
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Line 3, column 98, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$98'.
Suggestion: $98
... 125 Kl in Sydney is the highest over 0.98$. Following by Brisbane with 0.81$. In a...
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Line 3, column 132, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$81'.
Suggestion: $81
...ver 0.98$. Following by Brisbane with 0.81$. In addition people in Perth and Adelai...
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Line 3, column 140, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...$. Following by Brisbane with 0.81$. In addition people in Perth and Adelaide is the low...
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Line 3, column 218, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$42'.
Suggestion: $42
...is the lowest pay for cost water over 0.42$. However the average bill per household...
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Line 3, column 223, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...e lowest pay for cost water over 0.42$. However the average bill per household of Perth...
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Line 3, column 293, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$332'.
Suggestion: $332
...ousehold of Perth is take the lead with 332$ According to the table the cost water ...
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Line 4, column 99, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$78'.
Suggestion: $78
...25 KL in Melbourne is the lowest over 0.78$. In addition the average bill per house...
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Line 4, column 107, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
... Melbourne is the lowest over 0.78$. In addition the average bill per household of it al...
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Line 4, column 175, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$253'.
Suggestion: $253
...r household of it also the lowest about 253$. Adelaide stand at lever 2 of the price...
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Line 4, column 190, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Adelaide) must be used with a third-person verb: 'stands'.
Suggestion: stands
...it also the lowest about 253$. Adelaide stand at lever 2 of the price water of people...
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Line 4, column 257, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$1'.
Suggestion: $1
...ce water of people use over 125 KL over 1$. Following by Sydney with 0.84$.
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Line 4, column 288, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$84'.
Suggestion: $84
... KL over 1$. Following by Sydney with 0.84$.
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Line 4, column 293, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ver 1$. Following by Sydney with 0.84$.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 773.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 171.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52046783626 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.44771437039 2.65546596893 130% => OK
Unique words: 76.0 106.607317073 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.444444444444 0.547539520022 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 235.8 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.0688525932 43.030603864 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.3 112.824112599 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4 5.23603664747 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 1.69756097561 1119% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109062695571 0.215688989381 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0492192161925 0.103423049105 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0664060832006 0.0843802449381 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0979048115797 0.15604864568 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0694607779928 0.0819641961636 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 13.2329268293 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.64 11.4140731707 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.6 8.06136585366 82% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 40.7170731707 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.