In the realm of social media, the issue of media outlets publicizing the private lives of celebrities is a hot topic. Some people believe that celebrities should accept this intrusion as part of their fame. In my opinion, I only partially agree with this perspective.
Firstly, when the media shares the private lives of celebrities on TV, social media, or platforms like Facebook, these individuals often feel disrespected and fearful. They may lose the privilege of going about their daily lives without scrutiny, which can make them more reserved. For instance, let's consider a singer named Jack whose private life was exposed by the media. This invasion of his privacy caused him to lose some of the benefits associated with his public appearances.
Additionally, the act of publicizing celebrities' private lives on the internet can lead to a tarnished reputation and a decrease in credibility. While it is true that sharing private details on social media may attract more attention, it can be detrimental if the news is negative. Moreover, celebrities can lose devoted fans. For example, when I witnessed the invasion of my idol's privacy on TV, my admiration for them waned, and I ceased to be their fan.
In conclusion, I disagree with the idea of publicizing celebrities' private lives because it can significantly harm their reputation and reduce their fan base. Furthermore, it can have far-reaching consequences for their careers
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 424, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...asion of his privacy caused him to lose some of the benefits associated with his public app...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1216.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 233.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21888412017 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97231294094 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579399141631 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.4092452008 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.5384615385 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9230769231 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.69230769231 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348465009856 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121846896196 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108804626229 0.0667982634062 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227968593699 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0889930961492 0.056905535591 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 424, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...asion of his privacy caused him to lose some of the benefits associated with his public app...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1216.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 233.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21888412017 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97231294094 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579399141631 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.4092452008 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.5384615385 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9230769231 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.69230769231 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348465009856 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121846896196 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108804626229 0.0667982634062 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227968593699 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0889930961492 0.056905535591 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.