The table shows data about the average length of time (in minutes) that people of different ages spend in a consultation with family doctors in a number of countries.

Essay topics:

The table shows data about the average length of time (in minutes) that people of different ages spend in a consultation with family doctors in a number of countries.

The table evinces information regarding the mean time spend by persons in diverse ranges of age to consult with their GP in nine countries.

We can see people are categorized in 6 groups according to age and the most prevailing pattern is for the time to climax consistently with age. The medium time of consultation increase in some countries by getting older. It more than doubles in France, USA and UK, starting 16, 13 and 9, before ending 38, 31 and 21 respectively. This modestly goes up in Italy and Chile from 17 and 32 to 29 and 39 respectively. In Kenya, there is a reversed trend, which gently plummets from 15 to 10. This quantity encounters with a spike in Brazil, Japan and India, followed by a mild dwindle. This peak happens in the range of 40-60, 20-40 and 40-60 respectively for Brazil, Japan and India.

To recapitulate briefly, it seems spending time with doctor in countries such as France, USA, UK, Italy and Chile augments by growing old, while this is reverse order in Kenya. For the rest of countries, the middle-aged persons have more attention to their wholesome.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 40, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
The table evinces information regarding the mean time spend by persons in divers...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
briefly, regarding, so, while, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 907.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 191.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74869109948 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72316746063 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 106.607317073 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643979057592 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.3216645611 43.030603864 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.7 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 5.23603664747 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200258022317 0.215688989381 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0733520083751 0.103423049105 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0802827149311 0.0843802449381 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164160115655 0.15604864568 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0652064770662 0.0819641961636 80% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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