Many people today find that the cost of attaining a University-level education is extremely high for the students and their families. What are the causes of this situation, and how can governments, Universities and the students themselves overcome the problem?
By augmentation communities, there is almost not reservation that attending to university is an integral part of living, bringing a prosper future for persons. Whoever there are some hardships en route, one of which is nothing but pecuniary issues. This exorbitant outlay of university education stems from some issues, and to tackle these matters there are few ways. In this essay both causes and problems will be discussed.
There are some justification to climb the price of university. First of all, running a university with much more students needs money which the most part of that should be provided by students, leading to huge monetary onerous on the shoulder of students and their parents. Another reason relates to requisite cost of laboratories. To conduct a research, there is a need to money for raw materials, which should be obtained by student. For instance, before I commenced my master, having estimated the expenditure of thesis, which was exorbitant. Finally, these causes import a prohibitive expense to students and their families.
To obviate these problems there are some ways. Firstly, government could play a quintessential role via giving subsidy as well as loan to student so that it can be disbursed in long-term installments after students get employed. On top of that university can optimize running cost to dive university’s expenditure. Moreover, to cancel out the spending of raw material students can collaborate with firm. Provided students are given firm’s project, the firm can afford students needed raw materials. To clarify this point, personally I defined my master’s thesis according to a company’s project, giving the raw material from them.
To recapitulate briefly, albeit university impose huge disbursement on students, namely for its running cost and raw material, this charge can be omitted just by funding from government and drawing up by a firm.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 131, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...is an integral part of living, bringing a prosper future for persons. Whoever there are s...
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Line 1, column 184, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'hardships'' or 'hardship's'?
Suggestion: hardships'; hardship's
...ure for persons. Whoever there are some hardships en route, one of which is nothing but p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
briefly, but, finally, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, well, for instance, as well as, first of all, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1630.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39735099338 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05945213356 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586092715232 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.2654545086 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.8823529412 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7647058824 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88235294118 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263306829588 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0806005288834 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0586353000884 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152879276561 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0318370901365 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.74 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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