The table illustrates the amount of forest area in six continents, namely Africa, Asia, Europe, North America, Oceania and South America in 1990, 2000 and 2005.
Overall, Europe and Asia experienced upward trends during the period of time shown. In addition, Europe and South America accounted for the largest amount of forest land.
In Europe, standing at 989 millions of hectares in 1990, the number of forests witnessed an significant increase of 9 millions in 2000, and reached to 1001 in 2005. Regarding Asia, there was also an increase in the forested land from 576 in 1990 to 584 in 2005 after moderately declining to 570 in 2000.
By contrast, the opposite trend was true for the other continents. In 1990, the amount of forested space in South America was 946, compared with 749 in Africa and 708 in North America. Oceania was even by far the lowest with just 199. During the next 15 years, the forest area fell sharply to 904 in 2000 and just 882 2005. Similarly, the figure for Africa saw a decline of 40 in 2000, and ended the period with 691. The forested surrounding in North America and Oceania slightly went down to 705 and 197 respectively in 2005.
- The pie charts show the average consumption of food in the world in 2008 compared to two countries india and China. Write a report to university lecture and describe the data. 73
- The table shows forested land in millions of hectares in different parts of the world.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. 11
- The pie charts below compare water usage in San Diego, California and the rest of the world. 61
- The pie charts below show the average household expenditures in Japan and Malaysia in the year 2010. 61
- Development in technology has brought various environmental problems. Some believe that people need to live to solve environmental problems. Others, however, believe technology is the way to solve these problems. Discuss both views and give your own opini 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 63, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ia experienced upward trends during the period of time shown. In addition, Europe and South Am...
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Line 3, column 24, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '989 million'.
Suggestion: 989 million
...f forest land. In Europe, standing at 989 millions of hectares in 1990, the number of forests...
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Line 3, column 90, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...n 1990, the number of forests witnessed an significant increase of 9 millions in 2...
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Line 3, column 136, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nificant increase of 9 millions in 2000, and reached to 1001 in 2005. Regarding A...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, regarding, similarly, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 33.7804878049 133% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 964.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 205.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70243902439 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41449124978 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546341463415 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 278.1 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.4627030242 43.030603864 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.6363636364 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6363636364 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.27272727273 5.23603664747 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0738345035805 0.215688989381 34% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0306130466717 0.103423049105 30% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0301213996947 0.0843802449381 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0518517663234 0.15604864568 33% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0230688958111 0.0819641961636 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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