The table shows key data on the demographics of four different countries.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant (write at least 150 words)
The table compares the four ranking countries in terms of population, GDP per person and average life expectancy.
Overall, the most populous nation in China but this country has the lowest GDP per capita, while the US has the highest economic ouput per capita, but the lowest life expectancy.
As can be seen from the table, China has a total population of over 1.3 billion, followed by the US with the figure being significantly lower, at nearly 319 million. The population in the UK is the lowest, at only around 65 million, half the figure of Russia. In terms of GDP per capita, the US has the highest figure, at nearly 54million, whereas, the lowest figure is recorded in China, just about $6,800. GDP per person in the UK is approximately $41,800 almost three times that of Russia.
According to the table, life expectancy, on average, of people in the UK is the highest, at 81.5 years, while that of Americans is the lowest, at only 69.2 years. The figures for China and Russia are 75.2 years and 72.3 years respectively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 847.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 181.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67955801105 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53742176293 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546961325967 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 3.36585365854 267% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0320588451 43.030603864 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.875 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.625 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.375 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0460103911764 0.215688989381 21% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0238595728883 0.103423049105 23% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.021901695329 0.0843802449381 26% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0335093442349 0.15604864568 21% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0222082751577 0.0819641961636 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.2329268293 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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