The table shows the number of foreign visitors (in millions) to 7 countries.

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The table shows the number of foreign visitors (in millions) to 7 countries.

The table compares seven destination countries of foreign tourists regarding the number of visitors in total, from the UK, and form the USA.

Overall, it can be seen that France is the most popular destination from foreign visitors, especially for British people. On the other hand, the lowest-ranked countries are Australia and Ireland, respectively.

While France is mostly attracted by foreign visitors with 53 million, of which 7.4 and 0.1 million visitors come from the UK, which is the highest figure, and the USA, which is the lowest number, Australia with just 3 and Ireland with 4 million visitors are not favorite for visitors coming from foreign countries. The same numbers of visitors come to visit Australia form the UK and the USA, at 0.3 each. However, the statistics show that over half of the visitors come to see Ireland form the UK, at 2.4.

Italy and Canada are the second and the third countries in terms of attracting foreigners, with 20 and 15 million in total, of which 1.8 and 12 million were Americans and 1.2 and 0.6 were British, respectively, representing that Canada is the most popular country for American people. However, the numbers of visitors were almost the same for Mexico and Thailand, with 7 and 6 million in total, respectively. After Canada, Mexico is the destination for most Americans, at 5.5 million which accounts for over 80% of foreigners visiting the country of Mexico.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 369, Rule ID: FROM_FORM[4]
Message: Did you mean 'from'?
Suggestion: from
...ers of visitors come to visit Australia form the UK and the USA, at 0.3 each. Howeve...
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Line 9, column 369, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Australia) must be used with a third-person verb: 'forms'.
Suggestion: forms
...ers of visitors come to visit Australia form the UK and the USA, at 0.3 each. Howeve...
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Line 9, column 487, Rule ID: FROM_FORM[4]
Message: Did you mean 'from'?
Suggestion: from
...alf of the visitors come to see Ireland form the UK, at 2.4. Italy and Canada a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, regarding, second, third, while, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1199.0 965.302439024 124% => OK
No of words: 238.0 196.424390244 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03781512605 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69093948012 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487394957983 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 356.4 283.868780488 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 3.36585365854 297% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 104.921324691 43.030603864 244% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 149.875 112.824112599 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.75 22.9334400587 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.375 5.23603664747 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.347944853725 0.215688989381 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14815954766 0.103423049105 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10450173269 0.0843802449381 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199159715961 0.15604864568 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115962509571 0.0819641961636 141% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.2329268293 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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