The table shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same 2 periods.

The given table illustrates the total of guests visiting to Ashdown Museum before and after being refurnished. Meanwhile the charts inform the results of the questionnaires about their satisfaction on their visit during those periods.

Overall, the visitor's happiness after the renovation is higher than before being renovated. It is in line with the increasing number of the guests shown in the given table. It means that they are so contented to have a visit to the museum.

It is seen from the pie chart that there are some increase in their statement of being satisfied and very satisfied. Both category rise at 10% and 20%, it is respectively from 30% and 15% to 40% and 35%.

On the other hand, the percentage of people saying that they are not happy and not very excited decrease slightly. At first, there were 40% of the asked mentioning that they were not glad with the museum, however eventually, there are only 15% stating their disagreement of the new furnished museum. It is also not very different to the ones expressing their very dissatisfaction of the museum. It decresed from 10% to 5%. However, there is no any difference of the ones with their no response, it keeps 5% in both conditions.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 112, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Meanwhile,
...eum before and after being refurnished. Meanwhile the charts inform the results of the qu...
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Line 3, column 14, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'visitors'' or 'visitor's'?
Suggestion: visitors'; visitor's
...t during those periods. Overall, the visitors happiness after the renovation is highe...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...nted to have a visit to the museum. It is seen from the pie chart that there a...
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Line 7, column 442, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...resed from 10% to 5%. However, there is no any difference of the ones with their n...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, so, while, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 5.60731707317 375% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1009.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 209.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82775119617 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71358100992 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 305.1 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 1.53170731707 457% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.7549530368 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0833333333 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4166666667 22.9334400587 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.23603664747 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279639681762 0.215688989381 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0871844217749 0.103423049105 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0668388624834 0.0843802449381 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161753475436 0.15604864568 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0840401931615 0.0819641961636 103% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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