The table illustrates the changes in visitor counts before and after the redesigning of Ashdown Museum while the pie charts compares the level of visitor satisfaction before and after the renovation.
Overall, there was a conspicuous increase in visitor count after the renovation compared to the number of visitors in the year before renovation. The number of dissatisfied and very dissatisfied visitors had a decreased visibly in the year after refurbishment.
The number of visitors increased by 18000 after the redecoration from 74000 to 92000. The survey results show that the number of visitors who were very satisfied doubled from 15% to 35% and the ratio of satisfied visitors had a 10% rise which went to 40% from 30%.
In contrast, the ratio of dissatisfied visitors fell from 40% to a quarter and the proportion of very dissatisfied visitors decreased by half from 10% to 5%. The number of visitors who had no response did not change in the period and remained 5%.
- The table shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same 2 periods. 67
- The chart below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2002 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 87, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 822.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04294478528 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8851711263 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 77.0 106.607317073 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.472392638037 0.547539520022 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 247.5 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.73608439 43.030603864 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.428571429 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2857142857 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.57142857143 5.23603664747 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338930149165 0.215688989381 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.170890183668 0.103423049105 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0727933426811 0.0843802449381 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218964388148 0.15604864568 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0653299266861 0.0819641961636 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.