The gram given demonstrates how many Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas have been sold between 1999 and 2004 in UK, Switzerland, Denmark, Belgium and Sweden. Generally, sales of both coffee and bananas in 2004 was higher than those in 1999, meaning much more popularity of these two Fairtrade-labelled products half of decade after 1999, with exceptions of sales of bananas in Sweden taking a dip from 1.8 millions of euros in 1999 to 1 millions of euros in 2004 and those in Denmark decreasing by 1.1 millions of euros.
UK and Switzerland suggested most concerns to Fairtrade-labelled products among these five European countries. For coffee, UK consumed 1.5 millions of euros in 1999, which soared 20 millions of euros in 2004. For bananas, Switzerland accounted for the largest proportion of total sales among five countries with sales at 15 millions of euros in 1999, which creeped up 47 millions of euros.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '8 million'.
Suggestion: 8 million
...f bananas in Sweden taking a dip from 1.8 millions of euros in 1999 to 1 millions of euros in...
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Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '1 million'.
Suggestion: 1 million
...p from 1.8 millions of euros in 1999 to 1 millions of euros in 2004 and those in Denmark decr...
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Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '1 million'.
Suggestion: 1 million
...04 and those in Denmark decreasing by 1.1 millions of euros. UK and Switzerland suggested ...
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Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '5 million'.
Suggestion: 5 million
...an countries. For coffee, UK consumed 1.5 millions of euros in 1999, which soared 20 millions...
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Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '20 million'.
Suggestion: 20 million
...millions of euros in 1999, which soared 20 millions of euros in 2004. For bananas, Switzerland...
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Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '15 million'.
Suggestion: 15 million
...ales among five countries with sales at 15 millions of euros in 1999, which creeped up 47 mill...
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Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '47 million'.
Suggestion: 47 million
...ions of euros in 1999, which creeped up 47 millions of euros.
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Discourse Markers used:
['so']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.30303030303 0.268076937826 113% => OK
Verbs: 0.0787878787879 0.116061578633 68% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0606060606061 0.0759168565197 80% => OK
Adverbs: 0.00606060606061 0.0366838410393 17% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0 0.0131127313244 0% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.218181818182 0.155750635184 140% => OK
Participles: 0.030303030303 0.0379272487307 80% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.13973813487 2.65546596893 118% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0121212121212 0.0210936926555 57% => OK
Particles: 0.00606060606061 0.00175180941692 346% => OK
Determiners: 0.0484848484848 0.0948980150116 51% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0181818181818 0.00967000014798 188% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 916.0 1161.00487805 79% => OK
No of words: 150.0 196.9 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.10666666667 5.90752243213 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 3.73763899035 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.333333333333 0.337110787985 99% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.273333333333 0.247514529752 110% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.2 0.171178102325 117% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.106666666667 0.112407865282 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13973813487 2.65546596893 118% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 106.607317073 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573333333333 0.546246751206 105% => OK
Word variations: 47.5935027249 49.3433353143 96% => OK
How many sentences: 5.0 8.93414634146 56% => OK
Sentence length: 30.0 23.0094962315 130% => OK
Sentence length SD: 95.1806703065 42.9750493124 221% => OK
Chars per sentence: 183.2 135.714022679 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.0 23.0094962315 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.2 0.689975730869 29% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.84146341463 52% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.48048780488 473% => OK
Readability: 57.3333333333 47.7609492067 120% => OK
Elegance: 6.5 2.94281807926 221% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.439242045507 0.418131533498 105% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.225287577702 0.181151798455 124% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.171318377835 0.0850326197045 201% => Ideas in sentences are similar.
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.660180996959 0.706616315825 93% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.211320560475 0.157042692854 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.263564574852 0.228904883108 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.073567070493 0.108899403657 68% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.543850374476 0.367819155151 148% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0 0.0812612215331 0% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.378151229012 0.316326947829 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0633599356738 0.0921553760075 69% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70731707317 27% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.08536585366 98% => OK
Positive topic words: 1.0 3.16585365854 32% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 3.02926829268 99% => OK
Total topic words: 4.0 7.1512195122 56% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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