There are two table formations providing the data about five European countries sales of Fair trade- labelled coffee and bananas in the period of 1999 and 2004. Overall it is obvious that the sales of coffee and bananas are comparable amount values.
In Addition, Sales of Fair trade- labelled coffee in UK have the highest sales rate 1999 reached 1.5 millions of euros comparatively low in terms of 2004 having the high sales and reaching 20 millions of euros, whereas coffee sales are 3 millions of euros in 1999 for Switzerland but in 2006 has rose steadily to 6 millions of euros which is quite in resemblance with other European countries like Denmark, Belgium and Sweden having 1.8, 1 and 8 millions of euros in 1999 and has rose steadily to 2, 1.7 and 1 in 2004 respectively.
In Contrast, Bananas Fair trade sales are a higher rate as compared to coffee sales, In 1999 Bananas sales in Switzerland has the highest sales up to 15 millions of euros in 1999 and comparatively highest in 2004 up to 47 millions of euros. Whereas Denmark is having low sales in 2004 sale reached 0.9 millions of euros which was 2 millions of euros in 1999 quite a steady down fall in terms of sales. Moreover, in 1999 UK, Belgium and Sweden sales were up to 1, 0.6, and 1.8 millions of euros comparatively having improved sales in 2004 for UK it is 5.5 million euros, Belgium had 4 million euros and Sweden had shown a falling amount of 0.8 million euros.
In conclusion, Bananas had the highest sales of Fair trade-labelled in the period 1999 and 2004. Coffee seems at low sales.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '5 million'.
Suggestion: 5 million
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Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '20 million'.
Suggestion: 20 million
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Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '3 million'.
Suggestion: 3 million
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Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '6 million'.
Suggestion: 6 million
...erland but in 2006 has rose steadily to 6 millions of euros which is quite in resemblance wit...
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Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '8 million'.
Suggestion: 8 million
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Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '15 million'.
Suggestion: 15 million
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Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '47 million'.
Suggestion: 47 million
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Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '9 million'.
Suggestion: 9 million
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Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '2 million'.
Suggestion: 2 million
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Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '8 million'.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, moreover, whereas, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 33.7804878049 157% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1295.0 965.302439024 134% => OK
No of words: 281.0 196.424390244 143% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60854092527 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 3.73543355544 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54848502095 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.405693950178 0.547539520022 74% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 377.1 283.868780488 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 35.0 22.4926829268 156% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 146.107836888 43.030603864 340% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 161.875 112.824112599 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.125 22.9334400587 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.875 5.23603664747 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195999960516 0.215688989381 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132001544251 0.103423049105 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0757191660907 0.0843802449381 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178866989012 0.15604864568 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0696171961352 0.0819641961636 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.2329268293 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.33 61.2550243902 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.05 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 11.4329268293 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.9970731707 145% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.0658536585 163% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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