The data in the table provides information about sales(in millions of euros) of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2000 in five European countries.
As is presented, in UK the coffee sales had increased remarkably from 1.5 to 20. Denmark had highest sales in 1999 , when compared to other countries with 2 million , but over the period of time, it only increased with 0.2 million, Sweden also followed the same pattern of improvement , during five years, it barely increased from 0.8 to 1. Switzerland doubled the sales in five years, from 3 to 6. Belgium sales inclined gradually from 1 to 1.7 over the period of time.
Switzerland had highest sales for banana in 1999 and 2004 .Sales increased in UK and Belgium, in contrast sales decreased in Sweden and Denmark from 1999 to 2004. Sales for Banana in UK increased from 1 to 5.5 and in Belgium is 0.6 and 4 in 1999 and 2004 respectively. Sales for Banana decreased from 1.8 to 1 and 2 to 0.9 for Sweden and Denmark respectively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 826.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 175.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83195109004 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 106.607317073 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485714285714 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 235.8 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.053548671 43.030603864 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.25 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.875 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 5.23603664747 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 1.69756097561 825% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235180341014 0.215688989381 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128274506281 0.103423049105 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111389153453 0.0843802449381 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213316993479 0.15604864568 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.133943075185 0.0819641961636 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.