The tables below give the information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.
The tables illustrate the Fair trade commerce of coffee and bananas among five European countries in 1999 compare to 2004. The data measured in million euros. Overall, it is evident that the number of coffee selling in all the countries witnessed an increase. three countries (switzerland, the uk, and belgium) saw a significant increase in bananas selling. Meanwhile, the remaining countries witnessed a decrease at the end of the period.
In the initial years, switzerland reported the highest number of coffee selling, accounted for 3 million, then increased two times in the following years. The figures for the United Kingdom and Denmark were almost half of switzerland’s (1.5 and 1.8 million). In the next five years, the uk experienced sharply increase to more than thirteen times, while Denmark saw slightly increase. Regarding the other nation, belgium and Sweden stood at 1 and 0.8 million each in the initial year and then saw a small increase in 2004.
Turning to bananas selling, in the first year, 1999, switzerland experienced the largest figure (15 million), after that raised to more than three times in the final year. following that, the uk figure was almost twice higher than belgium (1 and 0.6 million each), both nations experienced an increased more than fivefold in the final year. On the other hand, Sweden and Denmark were two countries which were experienced a decrease during the period. At the first reported year, the selling stood at 1.8 and 2 million each, then decreased just about a half in 2004.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, regarding, then, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1283.0 965.302439024 133% => OK
No of words: 253.0 196.424390244 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07114624506 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66565554943 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 106.607317073 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.490118577075 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 367.2 283.868780488 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.0220556036 43.030603864 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6923076923 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4615384615 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115739477883 0.215688989381 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0486488077874 0.103423049105 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0819987089659 0.0843802449381 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0910565553545 0.15604864568 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0606769385198 0.0819641961636 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.2329268293 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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