The tables below give information about the world population and distribution in 1950 and 2000, with an estimate of the situation in 2050. Summarise the information.

Submitted by ThaoLyBui on Mon, 10/08/2018 - 05:07

The tables illustrates the numbers of population around the world and the distribution in the year 1950 and 2000, 2050 (estimation).

It is noticeable that the figure of world population has increased from 1950 to 2050. And, among six mains regions, Asia is seem to be the highest people. By contrast, the percentage of Oceania always maintains in 1%.

Firstly, increasing group, Africa, Asia, Latin America are some areas which has risen about the number's of population. Obviously, Asia is always on the top in whole 3 years and estimated 59% by 2050. This is followed by Africa and Latin America. In case of Africa, this area was 9% in 1950, rose 13% by 2000 and is estimated about 20% after the next 50 years. The percentage of Latin America population has increased from 6% to 9% in the 100 years period.

Secondly, another group includes Europe, North America and Oceania. The figure of Europe has strongly fallen approximate 15%. While, The second region is North America, a small decrease is about 3% in the next 150 years. Oceania is the end position in the percentage of distribution according to region, it rise slightly. This region is almost stable in 1%.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 976.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 201.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85572139303 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61244723818 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567164179104 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 292.5 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.038238229 43.030603864 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.7142857143 112.824112599 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3571428571 22.9334400587 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.42857142857 5.23603664747 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20053494792 0.215688989381 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0663529821184 0.103423049105 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.094835137975 0.0843802449381 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150266067126 0.15604864568 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108707353715 0.0819641961636 133% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.2329268293 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 61.2550243902 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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