The tables below give the information a the temperatures and hours of daylight in two cities during the same weekend in May 2007

Grammar and spelling errors:
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... the temperatures and hours of daylight, In Mumbai, India on Friday the maximum t...
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...daylight hours in Mumbai, India doesn’t didn’t change much a lot. While , in Moscow,...
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... doesn’t didn’t change much a lot. While , in Moscow, Russia the temperatures on F...
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Suggestion: ,
...elsius degree, that was the maximum most ,and the minimum degree is was even colde...
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...he maximum most ,and the minimum degree is was even colder about lower approximate...
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Line 2, column 506, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
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Suggestion: been
...maximum most ,and the minimum degree is was even colder about lower approximately 5...
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Line 2, column 629, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...y subsenquently rise up, on Saturday the temperature was at 13 Celsius degree and...
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Suggestion: been
...the maximum and minimum temperature are were 17 and 8 Celsius degree respectively , ...
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...ere 17 and 8 Celsius degree respectively , the daylight hours in Moscow, Russia ar...
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...:52 AM, and the Sunset’s was at 22:04 PM,that give us about was 18 hours of daylight ...
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...about was 18 hours of daylight in Moscow , Russia.
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Line 2, column 984, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...8 hours of daylight in Moscow , Russia.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 985.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 195.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05128205128 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0239706564 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.482051282051 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 300.6 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 8.94146341463 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 65.0 22.4926829268 289% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 212.642109345 43.030603864 494% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 328.333333333 112.824112599 291% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 65.0 22.9334400587 283% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 5.23603664747 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 1.69756097561 707% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228463028096 0.215688989381 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.176393175398 0.103423049105 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.083155295196 0.0843802449381 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.255675283954 0.15604864568 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113350289615 0.0819641961636 138% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 34.9 13.2329268293 264% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 13.96 61.2550243902 23% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 6.51609756098 262% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.5 10.3012195122 267% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.9 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.06136585366 118% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 11.4329268293 175% => OK
gunning_fog: 28.0 10.9970731707 255% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 11.0658536585 253% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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