The given tables demonstrate purposes that people stop smoking and the time when smokers determine to give up.
At first glance, we can see that most people choose to give up smoking due to the fact that cigarettes can damage their health quickly, compared to the least chosen reason-present health problem. Moreover, almost all smokers tend to stop smoking in the next 6 months and the total percentage of smokers who want to give up smoking is high.
In the first table, the reason better for health in general accounts for 71% consists of 64% heavy smokers and 74% light smokers. In contrast, with the choice of the present health problems, the figure is approximately 6 times lower compared to the most chosen one, being the lowest chosen purpose. Nearly a fifth of people who smoke a lot gives up smoking because of their present health, while that of slight smokers only registered at 10%.
In the next table, there is a total of 35% smokers who tend to give up smoking in the next 6 months. Additionally, there are other choices such as next year or next month, which are 21% and 12%; respectively. However, despite the fact that a large proportion of people decide to give up smoking, a minority number keep moving on smoking, which includes 40% of heavy smokers.
- The tables below show people s reasons for giving up smoking and when they intend to give up summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisions where relevant 73
- The position of women has changed a great deal in many societies over the past 50 years But these societies cannot claim to have achieved gender equality To what extent do you agree or disagree 89
- Overpopulation is the world s most serious environmental problem To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 73
- The position of women has changed a great deal in many societies over the past 50 years But these societies cannot claim to have achieved gender equality To what extent do you agree or disagree 89
- Investment in local amenities such as leisure centers is the best way for the government to foster a good community spirit To what extent do you agree or disagree What other measures do you think might be effective 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 291, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to purpose'
Suggestion: to purpose
...ost chosen one, being the lowest chosen purpose. Nearly a fifth of people who smoke a ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, so, while, in contrast, in general, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 3.15609756098 349% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1060.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 223.0 196.424390244 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7533632287 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4728573406 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542600896861 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 308.7 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.1145959443 43.030603864 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.777777778 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7777777778 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.11111111111 5.23603664747 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250175676331 0.215688989381 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117880313028 0.103423049105 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.080657257735 0.0843802449381 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183907075206 0.15604864568 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.056061363342 0.0819641961636 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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