The tables illustrate the data about the lengths of the day and temperatures in Moscow and Mumbai on 3 consecutive days in May 2007.
Overall, temperatures were markedly higher in Mumbai than in Moscow, while hours of daylight were significantly fewer in Mumbai than in Moscow. In both cities, the morning temperatures were higher than the night temperatures.
In terms of temperatures, Mumbai is hotter than Moscow, with the early morning temperatures varied from 33 degrees of Celcius to 34 degrees of Celcius, and night temperature of 29 degrees of Celcius. In contrast, Moscow saw a wide range of temperature fluctuation, with 8 degrees of Celcius to 13 degrees of Celcius in the mornings, and 2 degrees of Celcius to 9 degrees of Celcius at night.
In India, the sun rose constantly at 6 am and set around 7 pm with 13 hours long days, whereas Moscow had approximately 18 hours long days starting and ending at around 4 am and 10 pm respectively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 201, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...t temperature of 29 degrees of Celcius. In contrast, Moscow saw a wide range of te...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...us to 9 degrees of Celcius at night. In India, the sun rose constantly at 6 am ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, whereas, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 801.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 164.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88414634146 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03589349548 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530487804878 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 233.1 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.0442279006 43.030603864 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.5 112.824112599 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3333333333 22.9334400587 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118400274882 0.215688989381 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0709453515256 0.103423049105 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485426565361 0.0843802449381 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.085551988503 0.15604864568 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0523660900005 0.0819641961636 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.2329268293 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 61.2550243902 100% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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