the tables gives information on the temperatures and the hours of daylight in two particular cities in the same week in May 2007.
The tables compare the temperatures and the moments of both sunset and sunrise in Mumbai and Moscow during the same week of May 2007.
Overall, in terms of the temperature, the figures of Mumbai were significantly higher than those of Moscow. However, the sunrise in Moscow was clearly earlier than that of its counterpart.
The temperatures in Mumbai on Friday varied from 33 to 29, which were sharply higher than those of Moscow, from 5 to 8, respectively. While the figures in Mumbai were similar from Friday to Sunday, at 33 and 29, the residents in Moscow witnessed an increase in the temperature from 5-8 range on Friday to 9-13 on Sunday.
In Mumbai, the hours of the sunrise were similar on the last three days of the week, at 6:00, which was sorely later than that of Moscow, at 4:15 and 4:05 and 4:10, respectively. In contrast, while the sunset in Mumbai fluctuated in the 19:05–19:15 range between Friday and Sunday, those of Moscow were considerably later and similar in the three days, at 22:00.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 364, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nd similar in the three days, at 22:00.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 845.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 176.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80113636364 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66761817455 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 80.0 106.607317073 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.454545454545 0.547539520022 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 247.5 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3645244294 43.030603864 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.714285714 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1428571429 22.9334400587 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 5.23603664747 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0926085680242 0.215688989381 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0587119674209 0.103423049105 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.096193282315 0.0843802449381 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0894895046814 0.15604864568 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115813420173 0.0819641961636 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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