TASK 1: The map below shows the development of a seaside village between 1995 and the present.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given picture sets out how the seaside village has changed from 1995 to now.
Overall, it clearly that a seaside village experienced remarkable developments. Most noticeably, the surrounding of farmland and coast sea.
As can be seen from the picture, the around farmland which is demolished, and the new golf has been built instead. next to the farmland to the south, the tennis area was established, where the forest park was located in the past. To the west of the village, there are more and more houses constructed, when the new road was built. . Hh
it is noticeable that, the car park was erected next to the hotel in the conner of the street. Along this street, the old shop was refreshed, which is the restaurant was situated at the present. Opposite this shop, the fish market was replaced by apartment. there was a fishing port in the past, however, at the moment this area was removed from the sea village.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e village has changed from 1995 to now. Overall, it clearly that a seaside villa...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Next
...nd the new golf has been built instead. next to the farmland to the south, the tenni...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...nstructed, when the new road was built. . Hh it is noticeable that, the car pa...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...cted, when the new road was built. . Hh it is noticeable that, the car park was ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
... fish market was replaced by apartment. there was a fishing port in the past, however...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 765.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 162.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72222222222 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54452613881 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617283950617 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 225.0 283.868780488 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 18.8838555385 43.030603864 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.5 112.824112599 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2 22.9334400587 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.1 5.23603664747 21% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0564777307502 0.215688989381 26% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0269278148174 0.103423049105 26% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0407591877902 0.0843802449381 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0523471736987 0.15604864568 34% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418666967564 0.0819641961636 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.2329268293 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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