Task 1: The table below shows the percentage of the population by age groups in
one town who rode bicycles in 2011.
The table compares the proportion of the population of one town who cycled in 2011, according to five age groups.
It is clear that the percentage of female cyclists was higher than male cyclists in all age groups. Overall, the proportion of people in the age between 18 and 59 in both genders had fewer rode bicycles than people in other age groups.
In the age group 0-9, there had over haft of people who cycled, with over 50% both genders. It's the age group had the most proportion of cyclists in five age groups. However, the percentage of boy cyclists declined by over a haft in the age group from 10 to 17, under 25%. While this percentage remained high among 10-17 years old girl.
The figure for the 18-39 and 40- 59 years were much lower. People aged 18-39 was only about 17% of women cycled and under 10% of man cycled. This proportion continued reducing to about 12% and 8% for woman and man cyclists between age 40 and 59.
There was a slight rise in the percentage of people aged over 60 who rode bicycles, reaching over 18% for women compared with around 13% for men.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 93, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...who cycled, with over 50% both genders. Its the age group had the most proportion o...
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Line 5, column 274, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...the age group from 10 to 17, under 25%. While this percentage remained high among 10-...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 897.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 200.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.485 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.202038828 2.65546596893 83% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52 0.547539520022 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 259.2 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.42813427 43.030603864 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.5454545455 112.824112599 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1818181818 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.27272727273 5.23603664747 24% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242178528882 0.215688989381 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100780919561 0.103423049105 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0742028190949 0.0843802449381 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152675455384 0.15604864568 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0816535804156 0.0819641961636 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.2329268293 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 61.2550243902 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 11.4140731707 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.66 8.06136585366 83% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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