Task 1: The table below shows the percentage of the population by age groups in
one town who rode bicycles in 2011.
The table gives information about the proportion of the population of one town who cycled in 2011, according to five age groups
It is noticeable, the percentage of children under ten years old used bicycles was highest in both genders. however, for all age groups, the proportion of female cyclists was higher than male cyclists.
In terms of the female group, the proportion of girls in 0-9 ages was highest, at 51,3% which followed by teenagers (10-17 years old) at 42.2%. however, with the older groups, the figure for that was decreased at 18-39 ages and 40-59 ages which were 17,1% and 12,3%, respectively. In the oldest group, women over 60 who took part in riding bicycles was increased to 18,5%.
For the males, the percentage of boys under ten years old who cycled was two times the figure for teenagers (10-17 ages), at 50,3% and 24,6% respectively. Similar to female groups, the rate of men cyclist aged 18-39 and 40-59 were much lower than others, at 9.7% and 13.2%, lower than the oldest group which was accounted for 13.2%
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 109, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...d bicycles was highest in both genders. however, for all age groups, the proportion of ...
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Line 9, column 143, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
... by teenagers 10-17 years old at 42.2%. however, with the older groups, the figure for ...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 869.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 180.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82777777778 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38241370499 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 237.6 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3949967221 43.030603864 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.142857143 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7142857143 22.9334400587 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 5.23603664747 19% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189612890749 0.215688989381 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100041809416 0.103423049105 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0871292676142 0.0843802449381 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149792740394 0.15604864568 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100612356993 0.0819641961636 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.48 61.2550243902 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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