Task 1the bar chart below shows the results of survey conducted by a personnel department at a major company. The survey was carried out on 2groups of workers :those aged from 18-30and those aged 45-60and shows factors affecting their work performance
The given bar chart indicates a survey on two different age group. On the factor to contributing to make their environment pleasure for working.
It can bee seen, the percent of working performance are 100%for18-30 year old. The percent of the chance for personal development is the 90% follow by relaxed working environment and the promotion prospects they are some 18% .furthermore 75% and the job satisfaction own approximately 53% for factor tinally the job security as 40% .
Secondly, the percent of the aged performance start from 45-60 .the percent of the money is the higher position than other by the previous performance .furthermore the rating of the team spirit and the work environment have 60%and30%respectively.
Over all, the percent of the factor by report of 18-30 year old , the percent of the change for personal development the highest position in the map
- Task 1the bar chart below shows the results of survey conducted by a personnel department at a major company. The survey was carried out on 2groups of workers :those aged from 18-30and those aged 45-60and shows factors affecting their work performance 56
- The bar graph illustrations different Games which were played in Australia in year2003 11
- Task 1: the graph shows the demand for electricity in england during typical days in winter and summer. The pie chart shows how electricity is used in an average English home. 73
- Task 1thetablebelowshowstheresultsofasurveyofaveragenumberofcarsperhoursusingthreesubranroadsduringworkinghoursinaten-years pollution monitoring programme. Traffic calming was introduced in harper lane at the beginning of 1999. 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...their environment pleasure for working. It can bee seen, the percent of working ...
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...he promotion prospects they are some 18% .furthermore 75% and the job satisfaction...
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...r factor tinally the job security as 40% . Secondly, the percen...
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...actor tinally the job security as 40% . Secondly, the percent of the aged perfor...
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...of the aged performance start from 45-60 .the percent of the money is the higher p...
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...n than other by the previous performance .furthermore the rating of the team spiri...
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...f the factor by report of 18-30 year old , the percent of the change for personal ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 12.0 3.97073170732 302% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 738.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 143.0 196.424390244 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16083916084 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.45807182446 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2428463298 2.65546596893 122% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608391608392 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 217.8 283.868780488 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.9987693294 43.030603864 184% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.0 112.824112599 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8333333333 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.23603664747 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146172906398 0.215688989381 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0797991001969 0.103423049105 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523755466166 0.0843802449381 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0948589410595 0.15604864568 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.053699241576 0.0819641961636 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.2329268293 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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