Task 1the bar chart below shows the results of survey conducted by a personnel department at a major company. The survey was carried out on 2groups of workers :those aged from 18-30and those aged 45-60and shows factors affecting their work performance
The given bar chart indicates a survey on two different age group. On the factor to contributing to make their environment pleasure for working.
It can bee seen, the percent of working performance are 100%for18-30 year old. The percent of the chance for personal development is the 90% follow by relaxed working environment and the promotion prospects they are some 18% .furthermore 75% and the job satisfaction own approximately 53% for factor tinally the job security as 40% .
Secondly, the percent of the aged performance start from 45-60 .the percent of the money is the higher position than other by the previous performance .furthermore the rating of the team spirit and the work environment have 60%and30%respectively.
Over all, the percent of the factor by report of 18-30 year old , the percent of the change for personal development the highest position in the map
- Task 1thetablebelowshowstheresultsofasurveyofaveragenumberofcarsperhoursusingthreesubranroadsduringworkinghoursinaten-years pollution monitoring programme. Traffic calming was introduced in harper lane at the beginning of 1999. 67
- The bar graph illustrations different Games which were played in Australia in year2003 11
- Task 1the bar chart below shows the results of survey conducted by a personnel department at a major company. The survey was carried out on 2groups of workers :those aged from 18-30and those aged 45-60and shows factors affecting their work performance 56
- Task 1: the graph shows the demand for electricity in england during typical days in winter and summer. The pie chart shows how electricity is used in an average English home. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...their environment pleasure for working. It can bee seen, the percent of working ...
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...he promotion prospects they are some 18% .furthermore 75% and the job satisfaction...
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...r factor tinally the job security as 40% . Secondly, the percen...
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...actor tinally the job security as 40% . Secondly, the percent of the aged perfor...
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...of the aged performance start from 45-60 .the percent of the money is the higher p...
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...n than other by the previous performance .furthermore the rating of the team spiri...
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...f the factor by report of 18-30 year old , the percent of the change for personal ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 12.0 3.97073170732 302% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 738.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 143.0 196.424390244 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16083916084 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.45807182446 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2428463298 2.65546596893 122% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608391608392 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 217.8 283.868780488 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.9987693294 43.030603864 184% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.0 112.824112599 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8333333333 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.23603664747 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146172906398 0.215688989381 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0797991001969 0.103423049105 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523755466166 0.0843802449381 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0948589410595 0.15604864568 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.053699241576 0.0819641961636 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.2329268293 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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