Task 1: the graph shows the demand for electricity in england during typical days in winter and summer. The pie chart shows how electricity is used in an average English home.
The given line graph reveals the information about the demand of electricity in winter and summer by England. The data is celebrated in units of electricity for different purposes. The data is calibrated in per centum.
It can be seen that the typical daily demand of electricity in three hours is 15,000 in summer while it had been 39,000 in winter. Within six hours the demand of electricity slightly decrease in both seasons. In after 9hours the requirement has increased slightly in summer and winter the electricity has been need in summer and winter about 18000and 39,000respectively.after15hour demand of electricity increase in winter where as decrease in summer. A part from this in 21hours requirements of electricity increase in both summer and winter, and reach at 18000,43000 respectively after that need is going to decrease.
On the other hand side in pie chart the usage of electricity about 52.5%to heating the rooms and in heating the water. Where as 17.5% electricity is using in electric equipment like ovens, kettles, washing machine etc, and 15% has been used for the television, lighting and for radio, and same per centum of electricity used for housework like usage of vacuum cleaner, food mixer and electric tools.
Overall, It is evident that the typical daily demand of electricity in England is more in winter as compair to summer, large use of electricity in heating room or water.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 182, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... of electricity for different purposes. The data is calibrated in per centum. It c...
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Line 2, column 423, Rule ID: WHERE_AS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whereas'?
Suggestion: whereas
...emand of electricity increase in winter where as decrease in summer. A part from this in...
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Line 3, column 120, Rule ID: WHERE_AS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Whereas'?
Suggestion: Whereas
...ing the rooms and in heating the water. Where as 17.5% electricity is using in electric ...
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Line 3, column 401, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...cleaner, food mixer and electric tools. Overall, It is evident that the typical ...
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Line 4, column 171, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...f electricity in heating room or water.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1182.0 965.302439024 122% => OK
No of words: 233.0 196.424390244 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07296137339 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1693818779 2.65546596893 119% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502145922747 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 369.0 283.868780488 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.5237202576 43.030603864 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.2 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.2 5.23603664747 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.381695231724 0.215688989381 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.161291533005 0.103423049105 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.084810943607 0.0843802449381 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.25341578779 0.15604864568 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0236457462743 0.0819641961636 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.