These days, many people turn to doctors and medicines instead of following a healthy lifestyle. I totally disagree with this approach and I believe that having a healthy lifestyle cannot be substituted with medicines.
I think one important factor which constitutes a healthy lifestyle is a good diet. You can not replace a nourishing and healthy diet with supplements and vitamin pills. That means your nutrition shouldn't be relied on vitamin pills or powders of protein or collagen. Enough vitamins and other essential minerals for your body should be gained through your nutrition. So, eating variety of vegetables, fruits and all types of foods can provide all your body requirements, which are also absorbed better than pills by the digestion system of your body. However, inclusion of various types of foods in your shopping list and providing them regularly can be hard for some people; therefore, they escape from it.
Another influential aspect of a healthy lifestyle is getting sufficient and regular exercise. In my opinion, nothing can have the same effect on the heath as exercise. It contributes to the health of your heart and lungs, it builds and maintains your muscles and as a consequence prevents many chronic and annoying pains of middle age such as arthritis. It prevents obesity, which itself is the main cause of many diseases. Some people do not have enough time, or it is better to say that they do not allocate time for exercise. Instead, sometimes they turn to medicines or tablets to burn calories and fat, which has really irreparable harms on the natural performance of their body. Moreover, there are many other measures which contribute to human's health, for instance adequate night sleep, drinking plenty of water, avoiding from smoking and alcoholic drinks, putting aside junk food and etc.
It can be concluded that, although a healthy lifestyle has more substantial and permanent impact on health, unfortunately, many people prefer continue to smoking for example and relying on some pills prescribed by doctors to regulate their blood pressure and heart beat. In my conviction, it is not sensible at all.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... cannot be substituted with medicines. I think one important factor which const...
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Line 3, column 196, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: shouldn't
...itamin pills. That means your nutrition shouldnt be relied on vitamin pills or powders o...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 890, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
...coholic drinks, putting aside junk food and etc. It can be concluded that, although a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, really, so, therefore, for example, for instance, i think, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 22.0 6.8 324% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 5.60731707317 606% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1803.0 965.302439024 187% => OK
No of words: 350.0 196.424390244 178% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15142857143 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 3.73543355544 116% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69107216324 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 106.607317073 191% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582857142857 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 557.1 283.868780488 196% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 1.53170731707 718% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 8.94146341463 190% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.9890814207 43.030603864 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.058823529 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5882352941 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76470588235 5.23603664747 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 3.70975609756 297% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229281378954 0.215688989381 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0707839030519 0.103423049105 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.073149987288 0.0843802449381 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164265378121 0.15604864568 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0876012740517 0.0819641961636 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 40.7170731707 231% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... cannot be substituted with medicines. I think one important factor which const...
^^^
Line 3, column 196, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: shouldn't
...itamin pills. That means your nutrition shouldnt be relied on vitamin pills or powders o...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 890, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
...coholic drinks, putting aside junk food and etc. It can be concluded that, although a...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, really, so, therefore, for example, for instance, i think, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 22.0 6.8 324% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 5.60731707317 606% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1803.0 965.302439024 187% => OK
No of words: 350.0 196.424390244 178% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15142857143 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 3.73543355544 116% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69107216324 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 106.607317073 191% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582857142857 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 557.1 283.868780488 196% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 1.53170731707 718% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 8.94146341463 190% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.9890814207 43.030603864 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.058823529 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5882352941 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76470588235 5.23603664747 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 3.70975609756 297% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229281378954 0.215688989381 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0707839030519 0.103423049105 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.073149987288 0.0843802449381 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164265378121 0.15604864568 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0876012740517 0.0819641961636 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 40.7170731707 231% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.